Question

Can somebody fix this sentence for me pleaseeee.

In january I saw my friend lucy and Jackie. we went to the park and saw my other friend alison with her Cute dog Alex.

Answer 1

Answer:

In January,  I saw my friend lucy and Jackie; We went to the park and saw my other friend alison with her Cute dog Alex.

Answer 2

Answer:

In January I went with my friends Lucy and Jackie to the park and we saw my other friend Alison with her cute dog Alex .

Hope these helps I tried

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