Question

How can you revise this paragraph to expand a variety of sentence patterns? A tall thin man stood on the bridge. His long, straight hair blue and the breeze. He carried a small,

Answer 1

Answer:

Use descriptive wording

Explanation:

A man, tall and lanky, stood atop the wooden bridge. His hair, devoid of curls, would drape across his shoulders if not for the soft breeze.

If you give me the rest of the paragraph I can write the rest.