Question

Read the paragraph.
[1] Cory tried out for his school play, Rumors, by Neil Simon.
[2] Cory got the part of “Ken.”
[3] Cory attended rehearsal every day after school, and he practiced his lines every night.
[4] Cory was fantastic on opening night.
[5] Cory made the audience laugh!

Why does this paragraph lack sentence variety?
Each sentence begins with the subject.
Each sentence begins with a dependent clause.
Each sentence begins with a prepositional phrase.
Each sentence begins with the predicate.

Answer 1

Answer:

The sentences are too simple. They lack a sense of, pop.

Explanation:

The sentences are too simple because they just sound like a kindergartener wrote it. The 1 thing that it lacks is detail. You don't get a lot of details. So it is like a dry play.