Question

i need a title for this mang it is not done yet ples help and make it matches the thing down below
and tell me how you like it and what i should add


There was a kid who's name was Kaiki Gesshoku, he had only one friend which was his dog mazoku. All the people would ignore him like he was not even there. As he was at school all of the kids were happy around him and tried to make friends but all the adults would whisper something and stared at him so he felt they were talking about him. One day a new kid came in and his name was Kage Kataoka. The teacher said “go set to kaiki, he will be your guide today”. Kaiki was shocked he did not want to be someone's guide but he wanted a friend so he went along with it. Kage was quiet and he wouldn't talk. “So your name is kage. My name is kaiki gesshoku but call me kaiki.” kage looked up at kaiki and sead “ok kaiki.’’ as kaiki showed kage around the school kage talked more often. After school kaiki showed kage mazoku, kage loved his dog and his name because his fur is grey, black and white. “I wish I had a dog like you," sead kage."well you can visit mazoku anytime if it is ok with mazoku” sead kaiki. "Woof!” sead mazoku.

Answer 1

1)make the beginning more of an exciting time to catch the readers attention yes his dog was his only friend. create imagery with the dog and expand on it.

2)use grammarly for it helps a lot

3)I'm looking forward to reading more but it needs an edge

constructive criticism only

Explanation:

im sorry I can't help with the title