Based on sentence fluency, transitions, and writing conventions, which conclusion most needs revision?
Finally, scientists continue to argue their cases for and against a manned mission to Mars. However, an eventual
mission seems likely.
In the end, there are logical pros and cons for a manned mission to Mars. It seems its more a matter of when it will
happen than if it happens.
In conclusion, there are good arguments for and against a manned mission to Mars. But based on the evidence, it
seems as though a manned mission is likely.
Overall, scientists continue to debate the pros and cons of a manned mission to Mars. Yet despite their indecision,
it seems almost certain that a mission will happen.
