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More than 50 people have found jobs through this program. Mr. Allen was once homeless. You can take a career class there and get help with a job search. Hope House was founded in March 2014. Did you know that they will fit you for a suit so you can go to a job interview? The organization has nonprofit status, so most of the budget can be spent helping people. Hope House is a place to go when you are down on your luck.

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Hope House was founded in March 2014, the organization has nonprofit status meaning most of the budget can be spent on people! More than 50 people have found jobs through this program for instance, Mr.Allen, who was once homeless. In this program, you can take a career class and get help finding a job. Hope House is an amazing place! Did you know they will fit you for a suit... just for a job interview?!