Question

Read the sentence.

I want to be a pastry chef I am thinking of attending a baking school after graduation.

Which revision most effectively corrects the fused sentence?


A) I want to be a pastry chef, before I am thinking of attending a baking school after graduation.

B) I want to be a pastry chef, I am thinking of attending a baking school after graduation.

C) I want to be a pastry chef, so I am thinking of attending a baking school after graduation.

D) I want to be a pastry chef thinking of attending a baking school after graduation.

Answer 1

Answer:

C

Explanation:

C correctly demonstrates the use of a transition word after a comma for this situation.

Answer 2

Answer:

Which sentences show the writer reflecting on and growing from an experience?

✔ sentences 2 and 3

When does the writer connect these experiences to the future goal?

✔ in sentence 4

Explanation: