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[...] As she revises her paper, Hailey should NOT __________.
Answer:
develop a list of keywords to further research her topic
Explanation:
The list of keywords and the research to deepen the topics shown in the outline of a thesis, essay, or any other academic text should not be done during the revision of the text outline, but before, during the elaboration of the outline. This is because in order to draft a text, the author must have already searched for keywords that help him to deepen the ideas he has allowing him to make a well-structured sketch that will give rise to a well-done text coherent and cohesive.