Question

PLEASE help me! I have limited time! I will give BRAINLIEST!!!

Question:
Rewrite the same sentence in your own style and and describe ways in which your revision improved the sentence or made it less effective.

Sentence:
In compliance with the request of a friend of mine, who wrote me from the east, I called on good natured, garrulous old Simon Wheeler, and inquired after my friend’s friend, Leonidas W. smiley, as requested to do, and I hereunto append the result.

I would appreciate anyone’s help bcz I’m struggling so bad. Thank you :)

Answer 1

Answer:

I asked my good friend Simon Wheeler about a friend of mine who wrote to me from the east that wanted to know something. I also asked him something my friend's friend Leonidas W. Smiley wanted to know, since he asked me to do so.

Explanation:

Make it sound something you would say. Not many people talk like this, so write as if you were talking a normal conversation with your friend.