Question

please help me! I have limited time! I will give BRAINLIEST!!!

Question:
Rewrite the same sentence in your own style and and describe ways in which your revision improved the sentence or made it less effective.

Sentence:
And he ketches Dan’l by the nap of the neck, and lifted him up and says “Why, blame my cats, if he don’t weigh five pound!” And turned him upside down, and he belched out a double handful of shot.

Please I would appreciate anyone’s help bcz I’m rly struggling! Thank you :)

Answer 1

Answer:

Dan'l was caught by the nap of the neck. And he turns him upside down and says " why, blame my cats, if he don't weigh five pound!" . With that he belched out a double handful of shot .

My revision improved the sentence because it made it so much more clear and easier the make sense of than the original way.

I hoped this helped have a blessed life and please give me BRAINLIEST! i really need it hope you get a good grade

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