Question

Read the beginning of Denise's personal narrative.
What problem needs to be fixed in Denise's narrative?
1. Mr. Thompson loves teaching science. 2. Every
single day, he becomes very excited about what he is
talking about. 3. He waves his hands around, and
asks, "Isn't this amazing?" 4. All of his students love
his enthusiasm.
O Denise needs to add a strong example of Mr
Thompson's enthusiasm.
O Denise needs to include herself as a character in
the narrative.
O Denise needs to add a time relationship between
sentences 3 and 4.
O Denise needs to change the pronoun "he" to the
pronoun "we."

Answer 1

Answer:

Option 2.) Denise needs to include herself as a character in the narrative.

Explanation:

Why? Because if this is a personal narrative, you always have to include yourself. If you don't include yourself in a personal narrative... then it's not a personal narrative, but in the first statement, it says "Read the beginning of Denise's personal narrative." So, we now know why Option 2 is the best answer. I hope this helps and leave a comment if it does!

Answer 2

Answer:

B

Explanation: