Question

"Mark took a long look around his room. He looked at all the baseball cards he collected. He looked at the action figures he used to play with. He looked at the posters on the
wall. He looked at the bed that seems far too small now. He looked out the window at the park where he used to play baseball. It all looked so small now." What is the issue
with this creative writing?
A. There are no issues
B. It lacks a variety of sentence structure
C. It needs to be proofread
D. It is full of clichés
Best Selection

Answer 1

it lacks a variety of sentence structure

Answer 2

The issue with this creative writing is that it lacks a variety of sentence structures. Thus the correct answer is B.

What is the structure of a sentence?

The structure of the sentence is defined as how the words are arranged with the proper use of subject and predicate to show a clear meaning to the reader. It defines the composition of any sentence.

There are four types of sentence structure which include-

• simple sentences
• compound sentences
• complex sentences
• compound complex structure

In the given paragraph, it lacks proper composition of sentences as it uses similar verbs in a repetitive manner. To compose the sentence properly a complex structure or complex compound structure of sentences can be utilized.

Therefore, option B  It lacks a variety of sentence structures will be appropriate.

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