Question

Which error in the sentence should be corrected while revising?


My friend blogged and I read over his shoulder what he wrote it was good.


A. run-on sentence

B. repetition of ideas

C. unclear meaning

D. wordiness

Answer 1

Answer:

D- wordiness

Explanation:

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Answer 2

Answer:

Run on sentence

Explanation:

He needs punctuation after the I read over his shoulder.  It could potentially be: My friend blogged and I read over his shoulder, what he wrote it was good.