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I need help creating a thesis statement, I'm doing an assignment on how Greek Architecture influences American Architecture , i have already written an introductory paragraph, if you tell me what i can tell me what i need to improve in there that would help too. But please help me create a thesis statement, (Introductory Paragraph below)


Greek Architecture has come to inspire many important monuments and structures foreign to Greece, including the U.S countries, and many more. Greece has brought about many thing the world uses now. From our Entertainment, Theatre, and to even our art, even the English alphabet we use is derived from Greek Alphabet. Even the English Language has Greek roots, the world plays homage by acknowledging the things taken from Greece’s and Ancient Greece’s culture. Something over our head is even a work of Ancient Greece’s, and that would be its architecture, a common structure that we see that derived from Greek architecture are column pillars. They are simple, slender cylindrical structures used to hold up against gravity in building structures. They vary in design due to their orders, which are up to 5. There is more to Architecture than just simply pillars, In America, there are many structures originating from Greece that we take or take and modify. From the usage of Greek Architecture in ancient history, and even to the progression and spread of the structures and the continuous usage, this proves that Greece’s structures...(This sentence is my supposed-to-be thesis statement, what i need help with)

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From the usage of Greek Architecture in ancient history, and even to the progression and spread of the structures and the continuous usage, this proves that Greece’s structures... are immensely influential to moden American Architecture because of Greece's increadable innovations.

hi! i’ll help you edit your intro :)

•instead of saying “u.s. countries” just say u.s. because u.s. is a country itself.
•entertainment and theatre is lowercase.
•instead of “hold up against gravity” say “...structures used to support buildings.”
•after “...simply pillars” put a period.
•say “many structures originating from greece that we utilize and alter into our culture.”

•for the thesis statement try saying “from the ancient greek architecture to the modern structures and complex’s, greece’s architecture has proven to have an immense impact across the globe.”

i hope this helps! :)