Question

I am writing this song, idk if its good or not, this is what i got so far (rate 1-10):

There are so many words bottled up inside,
They scream out to be released,
You cast a spell over me,
been blinded for so long, but now i can see,
I could never walk away,
I would never turn my back away

Answer 1

Answer:

wow. im swept away. thats beautiful. thats so relatable, i could almost cry looking at it. just, wow. can it say 11? or 50? or more? come on plz?

ive tried writing songs before, but im no good

Answer 2

Answer:

its amazing

Explanation:

hope we can be friends

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