Question

40 POINTS!!
Can someone tell me if this is any good. My assignment is to write a suspenseful story but my teacher said she didn’t want us all to write a scary story, she said be creative so I thought of a love story. She gave me the first sentence and this is just a rough draft. Please let me know if it sounds like I’m dragging because I think I am.

Answer 1

Answer:

It sounds  great good job for me the assignment is okay and keep up the good work!

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Answer 2

Answer:

I don't feel that the story - so far - is dragging. My only concern is that I don't see any significant elements that would signal a suspenseful story. The only mildly suspenseful part is limited to the first couple of paragraphs.

Explanation:

Of course, this is just one person's analysis. Let's see what people have to say.