Question

It was a hot dry day last august when I realized that I was tired of Summer. On that day I came to the conclusion that Summer days were too warm, too long and too sunny. I decided to get in my car and drive North to the mountains for some cool air which I love and shady trees. It was the best decision I made all Summer

Write three to five sentences explaining what should be done to edit this paragraph for errors​

Answer 1

Answer:

To edit the paragraph, the writer should put a comma between hot and dry because they are coordinate adjectives. The word August should be capitalized, but summer and north should not. Finally, the writer should use a serial comma in the list and set off which I love with a pair of commas to avoid confusing readers.

Explanation:edginuity

Answer 2

Answer:

the checklist

The coordinate adjectives hot and dry should be separated by a comma.

August should be capitalized.

Summer and north should not be capitalized.

There should be a serial comma in the list.

A pair of commas should separate the phrase which I love from the rest of the sentence.

Explanation: