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Yes, I feel that as a teenager I do feel like I have too much screen time in my life to check and see if my friends or parents have texted me or watch videos and movies. And yes I do think it can affect our children and other younger children because they are like sponges and want to copy everything we do.

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Yes, I feel that as a teenager, I do have too much screen time in my life to check and see if my friends or parents have texted me, or to watch videos and movies. And yes, I do think it can affect our children and other's around us because they are like sponges and want to copy everything we do                                  .

As a teenager, I feel I have too much screen time in my life. Constantly checking to see if my friends or family have texted me, or to watch videos and movies, and yes, I do think that it can affect our children because younger kids like to sponge everything we do.
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