Attention thrill seeking people ! Are you ready for a amusement park that beats the competition? Well come on down to Scream park for a once in a lifetime experience. Come down to see our new state of the art technology rollercoasters. Including our newest ride the Sky High Terror Teacup. You may be thinking that this is just a normal ride , but on this ride the seats are spinning whine on. With our and with are newest safety features you will be insured a safe yet thrilling ride. Our ride travels at a pace of 105 mph and lasting 135 seconds. Take it from a famous actor Danny Devito when he tells you “This is truly the best ride ever”. So why are you still listening to me? Go get in line at Scream park for a once and a lifetime experience.

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Attention thrill-seeking people! Are you ready for an amusement park that beats the competition? Well, come on down to Scream park for a once in a lifetime experience. Come down to see our new state of the art technology rollercoasters. Including our newest ride the Sky High Terror Teacup. You may be thinking that this is just a normal ride, but on this ride the seats are spinning whine on. With our and with are newest safety features you will be ensured a safe yet thrilling ride. Our ride travels at a pace of 105 mph and lasting 135 seconds. Take it from a famous actor Danny Devito when he tells you “This is truly the best ride ever”. So why are you still listening to me? Go get in line at Scream park for a once and a lifetime experience.

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