Review the following essay. Which pair of sentences needs to be revised?
Living in Centerville
1-Centerville is a good place to live because it has great schools and a welcoming community.
Centerville's schools are excellent with wonderful teachers. The schools have excellent teachers who are experts in their fields. 2- In addition,
students can pick from a wide variety of sports and other activities. 3-Centerville's schools are so respected that students from other towns come
here for a good education.
Centerville is also well-known for its warm and friendly citizens. Indeed, my family and I have made a lot of dear friends here.
4- In short, Centerville offers the best of small town American life. Nowhere else will you find so many fun things to do and so many wonderful
people who care about you.

hi! the answer is A, aka the 1st paragraph. i know this because it says "Centerville’s schools are excellent with wonderful teachers. The schools have excellent teachers who are experts in their fields." i feel that they have said the word "excellent" too many times, even though it was twice, because it is a short group of words. i hope this helps you!

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