Question

What advice would you give to the author of the above message?

a. Save the good news until the end to build anticipation
b. Use a comma after the greeting to be more friendly.
c. Give readers the good news immediately.

Answer 1

Answer:

The correct answer is c. Give readers the good news immediately.

Explanation:

The message mentioned in the question is a type of apology presented to the customer. The opening sentence implies that there is some bad news. It would be better if the author would have presented the good news first because that would keep the readers involved and persuade them to read the text further.

Giving good news first gives a positive impression to the readers and compels them to read the text till the end.