Question

The revision of this sentence is clearer and easier to follow for readers:
Original: It always amazes me when people get excited about the snow because for me, it’s commonplace.
Revision: I am always amazed when people get excited about snow because it is rather commonplace where I live.
Select one: True False

Answer 1

Answer:

The correct answer is:

False

Explanation:

Even Though the revision of this sentence complies with the grammatical, syntactic and semantic rules of the language, it uses words that are not commonly used in popular jargon. In addition, it uses an organization of the words that, although correct, is not very common either, so the Original version of the sentence is much more understandable and accessible to the common reader.