[1] Snowshoe cats have a unique origin. [2] These delightful cats came
into existence because of a mistake. [3] A woman breeding Siamese cats
noticed that some of her kittens were born with white paws. [4] This is not
an acceptable trait of Siamese cats. [5] The woman decided she liked the
kittens. [6] She kept them, mixed them with American shorthaired cats,
and developed the snowshoe. [7] Snowshoe cats are intelligent, lovable,
and have four white paws.
What is the BEST way to improve the sentence fluency in the paragraph?
A) Combine sentences 2 and 3.
B) Make the tone consistent.
C) Vary the beginnings of the sentences.
D) Add transition words to some sentences.
