A student is writing a narrative for her creative writing class. The student wants to revise the draft to have a logical sequence of events that leads toward a realistic outcome. Read the draft of the narrative and complete the task that follows.
What are the TWO sentences that interrupt the flow of the narrative.
(1) Elizabeth never looked forward to dinner out with her family, and tonight was no exception. (2) As her parents loaded her and her five younger siblings into their van to head out to the restaurant, Elizabeth's stomach filled with dread as she envisioned the chaos that her family would bring to the restaurant. (3) Elizabeth always ordered spaghetti, regardless of the restaurant. (4) Her three younger brothers would commence spitball fights with their straw papers immediately upon being served their drinks. (5) While they regardless of the restaurant. embarrassed Elizabeth that way, her twin baby sisters would humiliate her with their constant babbling and food-throwing. (6) They were born mere minutes apart from one another and were identical. (7) Elizabeth knew that her parents would sit back and laugh at the chaos that was their family at dinner while Elizabeth suffered in silence. (8) No, Elizabeth never looked forward to dinner out with her family.
