I have to write a draft for my English class does this story sound right.
The promt is about you being able to hear others thoughts.
I was a scientist and I was working on a device that lets you hear others thoughts. I was ready to test it out I counted to three. One Two Three flick.
Eureka it worked I could hear everybody's thoughts , then everything went south when my friend Jimmy came over here. "He's such an idiot" Jimmy thought. I quickly bolted out the door and left work.
I have to turn this dumb device off. I was finally home after being in traffic for over an hour I turned it off and everything went back to normal.

As a scientist, working on a device that could hear everyone's thoughts was difficult and stressful for me. When my friend Jimmy came into the lab I could immediately hear what he was thinking. "He's such an idiot!" apon hearing I quickly and quietly left before he saw me. I didn't want be around him if this was how he truly felt, so I decided to go home. Traffic was a nightmare because not only was I stuck there for an hour everyone's thoughts were consuming my ears and mind. It was so loud. once I got home I used my emergency cancelation system that allows me to control machines in the lab and turned it off. immediately my mind became quiet and peaceful. never again will I want to listen to people's thoughts