Question

Which sentence corrects the incorrect sentence? 20 PTS!!!!

Incorrect sentence: The agenda for the evening is as follows first we will eat dinner then we will go for a walk finally we will watch a movie.

Choices:

The agenda for the evening is as follows: first, we will eat dinner, then, we will go for a walk; finally, we will watch a movie.

OR

The agenda for the evening is as follows: first, we will eat dinner; then, we will go for a walk; finally, we will watch a movie.

Answer 1

Answer:I think it is the option

"The agenda for the evening is as follows: first, we will eat dinner, then, we will go for a walk; finally, we will watch a movie."

Explanation:

Answer 2

Answer:

"The agenda for the evening is as follows: First, we will eat dinner; Then, we will go for a walk; Finally, we will watch a movie." (The second choice)

Explanation:

The first choice is incorrect because there should be a semicolon in between each thing you list. This is not present the in the first choice, but it is in the second, so therefore, the second choice is the correct one.

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