HELP PLEASE!!
Shania is writing an expository essay about drive-in restaurants. Read the following
paragraph from her essay.
1) These restaurants were essentially a kachen and serving area, surrounded by
a large parking lot.
2) "Cathops," as the servers were called, brought food out to
patrons sitting in the comfort and privacy of their cars.
3) Holding aloft trays of
burgers and root beer,carhaps used roller sites to zip between the kachen and the
cars quickly,
4) In the 1950s, drive in restaurants became popular and changed the
way people de out.
5) Some drive-in restaurants, like Sonic, still exist today.
How could Shania improve the organization of the paragraph?
A: move sentence to the beginning to serve as the topic sentence
B: delete sentences because it is unreated to the overall topic
C: reverse the order of sentence 2 and sentence 3
D: move sentence 1 to the end of the paragraph to provide a conclusion
