Question

After reading the paragraph below, rewrite it by adding transitions to sentences and improving the flow from one sentence to the next.

Kwami liked to ride dirt bikes. Kwami's mom didn't like him to ride dirt bikes. Kwami and his friends rode the dirt bikes on the motocross course near Michael's house. Kwami was very good. He won many of the races. Kwami decided to enter a real race, Kwami convinced his mom to come watch. She was frightened when she saw how he made his dirt bike fly over the hills. His mom was excited when he won his race.



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Answer 1

Answer:

Kwaimi liked to ride dirt bikes but his mum didn't like it. Kwami and his friends rode the dirt bikes on a motocross course near Michael's house. Kwami was very good and he won many of the races. Kwami decided to enter a real race and convinced his mum to come watch. She was frightened when she saw how he made his dirt bike fly over the hills but she was excited when he won his race.