Question

Can the sentence be written like this and still be correct? My daughter is having a birthday party today, because she is turning 7

Answer 1

Answer:

Yes. Remove the comma and add a period for proper grammar.

Explanation:

Answer 2

Answer:

No, it is no longer correct.

Explanation:

It appears that you have an unnecessary comma before the dependent clause marker BECAUSE. Consider removing the comma. Also, it doesn't matter, but I think the "7" in the end should be changed into a "seven" Lastly, there is supposed to be a period in the end.

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