Write a thesis/claim
Then a topic
Body paragraphs
Each body paragraph needs a topic
Then write a conclusion to wrap it up
You can start off by saying how great your culture....the things that make it great. Then in each body paragraph there should be a topic, so each body paragraph can be about you living in that culture or by describing the culture. Last, in the conclusion you can bring back your thesis and give your opinion.
Using transition words may also help such as: In addition, therefore, in conclusion, ect.