Question

What is the BEST way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning of the sentence?

Gwendolyn Brooks was shy, and she did not stand out in a crowd, yet she was a well-known American poet.
A) Brooks was a well-known American poet. She was very shy.
B) Gwendolyn was a shy person who did not stand out in a crowd.
C) Gwendolyn Brooks is one of my favorite American poets. She was shy as a young girl.
D) Gwendolyn Brooks, a shy woman who did not stand out in the crowd, was a well-known American poet.

Answer 1

the correct answer is D because it has the best punctuation as well as the best arrangement of the sentence

Answer 2

The best way to revise this sentence will be D. Gwendolyn Brooks, a shy woman who did not stand out in the crowd, was a well-known American poet.

It should be noted that when revising a sentence, it should be able to convey clear, concise ideas and the meaning of the sentence should not be changed.

In his case, the sentence "Gwendolyn Brooks, a shy woman who did not stand out in the crowd, was a well-known American poet" clearly conveys the information.

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