Need help editing my paper. I need too Recognize author's attitude and tone: Offer insightful analysis and explanations of how the tone changes when the perspective is altered. Can anyone help?

I am going to Dussel.

(I am going to be Dussel)

Dearest Baloini,

I was just done taking a wonderful nap when my roommate walked in. Ugh, I thought little Anne was always
Complaining. She walked up to me and told me that she wanted to use the table in OUR room two afternoons a week! My reply to this was simply, "No."
The little brat was not content with my answer and so then I said," I have to study too you know, and if I can't do it in the afternoons, I won't be able to fit it in at all. I have to finish the task I've set for myself; otherwise, there's no point in starting. Besides, you aren't serious about your studies. Mythology - what kind of work is that? Reading and knitting don't count either. I use that table and I'm not going to give it up!
Then the girl replied (doesn't she ever give up?) “I do take my work seriously. I can't study next door in the afternoon, and I would appreciate it if you would reconsider my request!"
She finally left but in the evening she went on again. I overcame her quick enough and I'm not going to tell you the conversation, it was VERY boring. Then just as I thought I had settled the matter, Pim talked to me too and in the end I had to let the brat have my study time.

Until next time, Dussel.

Respuesta :

Henlo, I see nothing wrong with this paper it flows nicely together and you can clearly see how perspectives are changed throughout this story, I also suggest "Grammarly." good luck anon

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i think nothings wrong

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