Question

Can someone please tell me if this sentence is good, (I speak a little bit of English) I just wanna make sure if this sentence is right or not
If it is not right, please tell me how I can right that sentence

Answer 1

THATS AN AWESOME SENTENCE YOU WILL GET AN A+

Answer 2

(War) should be capitalized and you don't need (had).

Overall it's a really good sentence