Question

Hey I need help with this. I posted one of these kind of questions earlier but here is another somewhat like it. I have written a somewhat simple paragraph on a book called]
The Runaway King by Jennifer A. Nielsen. Can you tell me what I can do to fix it or make it better in any way?

>>>>Have you ever imagined about being captured by thieves or pretend to be a thief?
Well, that's what happens in this well thought out fantasy. In The Runaway King, by Jennifer A. Nielsen, Jaron has quite a few obstacles before he gets to the pirates such as being capture by bandits and Imogen showing up at the pirate camp. One of the topics from this book I would like to discuss is Jaron's journey to the Pirates' camp and all he has to do to get there.

I'm sorry this is so long don't answer if you don't want or can't thanks!

Answer 1

It sounds like you thought out this question really well and really care about what you are doing, honey. 

One thing I would say is to restate and answer the question in the first sentence. That's just one of the things that teachers like to see.
 
One more thing that I just learned yesterday from my English teacher is that you can and take your "well" out to make the writing stronger.

I hope this helps. <3