Question

Which one sounds better ?

A long time ago there was a small, dark , and gloomy city in Kagoshima , Japan
Or

A long time ago there was a small,dark, and gloomy city of Kagoshima , Japan

Answer 1

A long time ago there was a small, dark , and gloomy city in Kagoshima , Japan

HTH ^^

Answer 2

the first one. the second one doesn't flow as good