Question

Which serves as the BEST thesis for a persuasive essay about the benefits of youth sports? A) What do you think about the benefits of youth sports? B) Youth sports are controversial, as some people think they push kids to injury and take time away from more important things. C) Youth sports, though controversial to some, give kids a chance to grow physically and to learn about hard work and commitment. D) Youth sports can include soccer, lacrosse, track and field, football, basketball, softball, field hockey, and just about any other sport that adults play as well.

Answer 1

C.

Youth sports, though controversial to some, give kids a chance to grow physically and to learn about hard work and commitment.

Answer 2

The correct answer is C, because a persuasive essay is trying to convince its reader that it’s main thesis is true. Also, persuasive essays should never involve first or second person pronouns unless you were specifically asked to include your personal opinion.