Read the following excerpt from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her organization?
Employees should be allowed to work from home for a number of reasons. First, being able to work from home eliminates a commute, which means less money spent on gas and less time wasted. Working at home often provides a quieter environment with fewer distractions. Finally, working from home allows pesple to salance their home and work lives better and spend more time with their families. Thanks to the Internes, millions of employees are now able to work at home. However, many employers are reluctant to allow their employees to work from home, maybe because of the loss of direct oversight.
a.by swapping the last two sentences
b.by defining a term when it's first introduces
c.by presenting the general issue before discussing an opinion
