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Kate and Mr. Jacks have made it out of the force field. Now, they're trying to figure out how to save the people from the airport. Kate said we must get back through the force field again. Mr. Jacks then asked Kate how would we do that with only one mirror. Kate has an idea to break the mirror into two, so they can both reflect the light.
Kate and Mr. Jacks get back through the force field with the broken mirror. Mr. Jacks said "would it be worng for us to leave all the people in the airport and save ourselves. We could die or get hurt trying to save the orther passengers". Kate said "would you want us to leave you?". Mr. Jack's said no with a sad face". They got back to the airport, to tell people what happened. They are very excited. They told everyone how they used the mirrors to not get burned. Everybody in the crowd yelled at the same time in excitement. Kate then said "there is one problem. We dont have enough mirrors to save everyone". Mr. Jacks said “can everyone on the plane check if they have a mirror”. All the passengers then went to check their bags. Some of the people on the plane were able to find a mirror in their bag. Some of the people started taking other people's mirrors and this started a big fight. Mr. Jacks noticed this and told Kate to do something. Everyone just wanted to be off the plane. Kate got everyone's attention and said “there are big mirrors in the bathrooms, and that should be enough”. Everyone rushed to the bathrooms to help take down the mirrors. This calmed down the angry passengers.
The passengers work together to take down the mirrors in the bathrooms. Kate counted each passenger to see how many mirrors she needed. The people on the were excited to help. After counting the mirrors she noticed that she was two mirrors short. Lisa the flight attendant remembered there was a mirror in her locker. After getting the mirror in Lisa's locker, Kate began to show the passengers how to reflect the light. After Kate told them how, they started to get through the force field, one at a time. Mr. Jacks was glad that he decided to help Kate get the other people on the plane through the force field.
