Uta has written this passage. Is her writing correct?
Weary to my core and shuffling upstairs from my parents' basement, I tried not to think. Almost forty and living with my parents while my
husband tried to find a job in this post-crash economy.
No. The passage contains a run-on sentence: "Weary to my core, and shuffling upstairs from my parents' basement, I tried not to
think."
No. The passage contains a sentence fragment: "Almost forty and living with my parents while my husband tried to find a job in this
post-crash economy."
O Yes, the passage is correct as is.
O No, the passage is too informal.
